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April 29th, 2008 (03:58 pm)
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Title: Rain (No Longer Monotone)
Fandom: The West Wing
Characters: Andrea Wyatt/Toby Ziegler
Prompt: [info]fanfic100: 66 – Rain; [info]un_love_you: 3 – This cancels out the hurt.
Word Count: 250
Rating: pg
Summary: Tradition, Wyatt-Ziegler style.
Author's Notes: It’s completely fantasy fluff. I’m not ashamed.



The first year after they were divorced (seven months and six days after the papers were signed), Toby showed up at his ex-wife’s townhouse and kissed her in the rain.

It was all she’d asked for on her birthday six years before, exactly a year after their first kiss. “Take me outside and kiss me senseless every year for the rest of our lives and I’ll be happy,” and he couldn’t deny her. He knew she never expected him to continue the tradition after their divorce, but there were too many things that were broken between them already. He wanted this one thing to remain intact.

And he liked catching her off-guard. She answered the door barefoot, raindrops splashing against her toes as she invited him in out of the rain.

Toby shook his head. “Nope. You come out here.”

“It’s dry in here.”

“The deal wasn’t inside. The deal was outside; you didn’t put a disclaimer on the weather.”

She realized then why he was there, just as he reached for her hand. She protested, but his thumb on her bottom lip silenced her. “We have to do this, Andy.”

He kissed her then, there in the rain, and she rose on her tiptoes to press against him regardless of the water sliding down his coat. His hands searched for skin, slipping under her shirt to slide in slow strokes over her back.

She avoided his eyes when she finally pulled back, and rested her forehead against his instead.

Comments

Posted by: the whirlwind is in the thorn tree ([info]medland)
Posted at: April 29th, 2008 11:09 pm (UTC)
XF - Forehead touching is love

FOREHEAD TOUCHING.

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:17 pm (UTC)
Toby - sorry // cannons_fan

YES THAT. EXACTLY.

Posted by: the whirlwind is in the thorn tree ([info]medland)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:44 pm (UTC)
XF - Foreheads are back bitches!

I have to comment just to use my other appropriate icon.

I like him touching her back under her shirt also.

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:47 pm (UTC)
Toby - smile // cannons_fan

Haha, I love it.

And her back is wayyyyy high up there on the list of things Toby likes best in the world, I think.

Posted by: if I seem a little strange, that's because I am ([info]raedbard)
Posted at: April 29th, 2008 11:15 pm (UTC)
Toby/Andy: it's just my family

Ohhhhhh. With the rain and the kissing and the "you didn't put a disclaimer on the weather". Ohhhhhyes.

*LOVESthem*

Oh, happysighs. He's so perversely romantic. She really ought to have predicted such things. ;)


Awesome. ♥

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:18 pm (UTC)
Sonogram // orangespaces

She really ought to have predicted such things.
One would think she'd have learned, but no.

I'm so happy that it works for you, and hope it went a little way to help the cheering up!

Posted by: amy_vic ([info]amy_vic)
Posted at: April 29th, 2008 11:29 pm (UTC)
Memory (Andy+Toby)

*FLAILYHANDS*

Birthday kisses! And bare feeeeet. On tiptoeses! *dies a million deaths*

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:21 pm (UTC)
Toby & kids // adventurepants

♥ ♥ ♥ Thanks for the flails. What's better than bare feet? NOTHING.

Posted by: absinthe & whiskey / poetry & prozac ([info]anonymous_sibyl)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 12:01 am (UTC)

That was lovely. Bittersweet and quite Toby.

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:21 pm (UTC)
Toby // rainblows

Oh, so happy you think so! THANKS!

Posted by: cassie ([info]kiss_me_cassie)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 12:17 pm (UTC)
WW our girls

Meeeep! I didn't have a chance to read this one the other day and... good god, I am sorry I didn't because it is lovely and sweet and so perfect! YAY!

Posted by: senseless things ([info]dancinginsane)
Posted at: April 30th, 2008 05:22 pm (UTC)
Ellie // adventurepants

ACCCCCCCTUALLY...this isn't the one I sent you. This was just me going rogue. So there's still something for you to get a sneak peek on!

But I'm SO GLAD you like this one! Thank you so much!

Posted by: Krazy Kat ([info]krazykitkat)
Posted at: May 1st, 2008 02:29 pm (UTC)
Toby/Andy

“The deal wasn’t inside. The deal was outside; you didn’t put a disclaimer on the weather.”

Heh! So Toby.

I don't know what else to say except lovely.

Posted by: The keeper of loneliness ([info]wanderlonely)
Posted at: May 3rd, 2008 01:32 pm (UTC)

OMG, I have a thing for forehead touching. ::thuds::

THANK YOU.

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